I was reading over it today and decided to put it on the back burner for now. It's a strong piece with the wrong attitude. I've been reading out of my O. Henry Award 1919-1934, and have realized that I could be a much stronger writer than I am now.
I will not delete this most recent piece. Rather, I will add it to the collection of pieces with the same basic plot. I foresee coming at from a much different angle, perhaps in the third person, a birds eye investigation of tolerance as an institution rather than the subplot being limited to LGBT discrimination.
For now, I shall recede to the comfort of my room and read about a punctual man whose serenity is based on timeliness.
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